This song builds nicely and the different sounds are well-layered, but while listening to the piece I was constantly distracted by the bass's use of nothing except the exact same four pitches (maybe that's by fault; I do not know what could be changed about that bass line), and the ending was awful.
Never repeat anything. Always change a few notes, change dynamics, change the rhythm, change note lengths, or something. If you make the piece more engaging before the change, then the change will be more effective.
I can imagine it would sound very intense if I did something like that. :3
This song would be very relaxing, but I think that the bass and bass drum should be less harsh and more smooth. I would also like to hear this song if you made the bass drum play on beats 2&4 (the 'cool' beats) instead of 1&3. Also make the volume be more dynamic. To me, the introduce-one-track-then-play-it-with -another-track style seems to be used too often..
This sounds terrible in little earphones, but it's quite awesome
I got an intense feeling of nostalgia and happiness as soon as the melodic part of the piece began. Thank you for being so good at this ^.^ . This piece is a work of wonders.
Another great track =D
awesome composition here =D
to much editng
I like the low quality alot, but start the melody earlier, and don't try to write your own parts >_<
I didn't just try to write my own parts, but I did it, and I like the outcome. ;)
Nice solos. You might want to slow it down a bit, though.
should be louder
Quite nice, but you should make the lead piano quite a bit louder and the base instrument louder also.
The second piano was also quite nice.
great song, but I I didn't like how it just fades out in the end.
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